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06-21-2002, 03:30 PM

Harold Harris

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I think the story would have been better if you had used a spell checker that is all

06-22-2002, 06:26 PM

dobbydog

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good story, however the spelling was horrible making it difficult to follow

06-26-2002, 04:17 PM

dobbydog

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sounds interesting.

what country are you from?

10-06-2002, 01:50 AM

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Try writing in english!

12-17-2002, 12:05 AM

cowgirlup

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I have to agree with the spelling thing.......

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02-13-2003, 03:21 PM

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I don't think you should dream of being a writer, the speling was horrible. Some of that didn't even seem to be sentences. What kind of name is Ina?

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