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Old 06-21-2002, 03:30 PM
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I think the story would have been better if you had used a spell checker that is all
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Old 06-22-2002, 06:26 PM
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good story, however the spelling was horrible making it difficult to follow
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Old 06-26-2002, 04:17 PM
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sounds interesting.

what country are you from?
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Old 10-06-2002, 01:50 AM
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Try writing in english!
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Old 12-17-2002, 12:05 AM
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I have to agree with the spelling thing.......
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Old 02-13-2003, 03:21 PM
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I don't think you should dream of being a writer, the speling was horrible. Some of that didn't even seem to be sentences. What kind of name is Ina?
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