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Harold Harris

06-21-2002 03:30 PM

Party

I think the story would have been better if you had used a spell checker that is all

dobbydog

06-22-2002 06:26 PM

good story, however the spelling was horrible making it difficult to follow

dobbydog

06-26-2002 04:17 PM

sounds interesting.

what country are you from?

Unregistered

10-06-2002 01:50 AM

Try writing in english!

cowgirlup

12-17-2002 12:05 AM

I have to agree with the spelling thing.......

Unregistered

02-13-2003 03:21 PM

I don't think you should dream of being a writer, the speling was horrible. Some of that didn't even seem to be sentences. What kind of name is Ina?

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