02-12-2004, 08:39 PM
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"Thank you, come again" too tame?
I see that 269 of y'all have checked out my story, and not a single comment. Sigh. Sniffle. Maybe it was too tame? The goal on that one was to be something different, more fun. However, I continue undaunted, and have posted another in the "Lesbian Stories" section. See if that floats your boat. It's called "Robyn's Roommate."
Once again, comments are appreciated.
Red
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02-12-2004, 08:50 PM
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It's not too tame... I enjoyed it very much. Just had not gotten a chance to leave you some feedback! Looking forward to reading the next one!
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02-12-2004, 08:59 PM
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Thanks, Lilith
Thanks, Lilith--you're a doll. I don't feel so alone out here now.  p
BTW, I FINALLY got the corset of yours I'd been coveting.
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02-13-2004, 01:29 AM
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I do believe I want in that shower with those two....... May I go as far as to ask you add to Robyn's Roommate, seems you have the talent for writing......
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02-13-2004, 09:46 AM
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Request Gladly Honored
Why, yes, Intrigued, you may. Thanks for your comments! I'm new to this interface, so I added it as a reply to the original, under "Robyn's Roommate, Part 2." I don't know if it'll show up correctly, but that's what you're looking for.
Red
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02-14-2004, 02:37 AM
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Showed up as expected, great addition...... Thanks for taking the time to write more....... Very enjoyable
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02-15-2004, 11:10 AM
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I thought the story was brilliant. It was original it had a fast pace (and a fast woman) and it gave a great story in so little writing. The imagnation was stimulated more by what was not there that had to come from the reader's mind. Excellent!
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12-09-2008, 05:54 PM
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I just saw this one for the first time.  I really like the narrative and how it allows the reader to use their own imagination. I'm sorry I've been missing it all this time. 
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12-09-2008, 11:43 PM
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Thanks, Aqua. I think that might've been my very first post here at Pixies. |
02-26-2009, 05:04 AM
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AZ, I've only just read "Thank you, come again" for the first time, and think it's delicious!
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02-26-2009, 10:05 AM
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Thanks, Gus! |
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