"Thank you, come again" too tame?
 

I see that 269 of y'all have checked out my story, and not a single comment. Sigh. Sniffle. Maybe it was too tame? The goal on that one was to be something different, more fun. However, I continue undaunted, and have posted another in the "Lesbian Stories" section. See if that floats your boat. It's called "Robyn's Roommate."

Once again, comments are appreciated.

Red

TUCA

It's not too tame... I enjoyed it very much. Just had not gotten a chance to leave you some feedback! Looking forward to reading the next one!

Thanks, Lilith
 

Thanks, Lilith--you're a doll. I don't feel so alone out here now. :op

BTW, I FINALLY got the corset of yours I'd been coveting.

Red

I do believe I want in that shower with those two....... May I go as far as to ask you add to Robyn's Roommate, seems you have the talent for writing......

Request Gladly Honored
 

Why, yes, Intrigued, you may. Thanks for your comments! I'm new to this interface, so I added it as a reply to the original, under "Robyn's Roommate, Part 2." I don't know if it'll show up correctly, but that's what you're looking for.

Red

Showed up as expected, great addition...... Thanks for taking the time to write more....... Very enjoyable

I thought the story was brilliant. It was original it had a fast pace (and a fast woman) and it gave a great story in so little writing. The imagnation was stimulated more by what was not there that had to come from the reader's mind. Excellent!

I just saw this one for the first time. :) I really like the narrative and how it allows the reader to use their own imagination. I'm sorry I've been missing it all this time. :nod:

Thanks, Aqua. I think that might've been my very first post here at Pixies. :)

AZ, I've only just read "Thank you, come again" for the first time, and think it's delicious!

Thanks, Gus! :D