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AZRedHot 02-12-2004 08:39 PM

"Thank you, come again" too tame?
 
I see that 269 of y'all have checked out my story, and not a single comment. Sigh. Sniffle. Maybe it was too tame? The goal on that one was to be something different, more fun. However, I continue undaunted, and have posted another in the "Lesbian Stories" section. See if that floats your boat. It's called "Robyn's Roommate."

Once again, comments are appreciated.

Red

TUCA

Lilith 02-12-2004 08:50 PM

It's not too tame... I enjoyed it very much. Just had not gotten a chance to leave you some feedback! Looking forward to reading the next one!

AZRedHot 02-12-2004 08:59 PM

Thanks, Lilith
 
Thanks, Lilith--you're a doll. I don't feel so alone out here now. :op

BTW, I FINALLY got the corset of yours I'd been coveting.

Red

intrigued 02-13-2004 01:29 AM

I do believe I want in that shower with those two....... May I go as far as to ask you add to Robyn's Roommate, seems you have the talent for writing......

AZRedHot 02-13-2004 09:46 AM

Request Gladly Honored
 
Why, yes, Intrigued, you may. Thanks for your comments! I'm new to this interface, so I added it as a reply to the original, under "Robyn's Roommate, Part 2." I don't know if it'll show up correctly, but that's what you're looking for.

Red

intrigued 02-14-2004 02:37 AM

Showed up as expected, great addition...... Thanks for taking the time to write more....... Very enjoyable

Crichton 02-15-2004 11:10 AM

I thought the story was brilliant. It was original it had a fast pace (and a fast woman) and it gave a great story in so little writing. The imagnation was stimulated more by what was not there that had to come from the reader's mind. Excellent!

Aqua 12-09-2008 05:54 PM

I just saw this one for the first time. :) I really like the narrative and how it allows the reader to use their own imagination. I'm sorry I've been missing it all this time. :nod:

AZRedHot 12-09-2008 11:43 PM

Thanks, Aqua. I think that might've been my very first post here at Pixies. :)

GusAspar 02-26-2009 05:04 AM

AZ, I've only just read "Thank you, come again" for the first time, and think it's delicious!

AZRedHot 02-26-2009 10:05 AM

Thanks, Gus! :D


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