Wow!! What a great story. Other than a few typo's there isn't much to be critical about. Well written and action packed. If you write any more stories, please let me know. (wicked smile)

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Good story line. Lead in well done, small climaxes run up to main and hold interest all the time. Well done !!!!!!.

great story

This one great story . I real hope to see more of your work .

Oh, my God! That was so fucking amazing! My only complaint? That I had to stop reading occasionally to masturbate! I was saddened to reach the end of the story, but I must admit that I was eager to give full attention to my own pussy! Well written and very expressive! A+++++++ I look forward to seeing more of your work on this site. You are a literary genius!
Amanda

i have to wank now

GOD DAMN THATS SOME GOOD SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This takes the prize. Perfect for finger-fucking my dripping cunt to many raging orgasms throughout the length of the tale. It gives me great ideas to try out with my boyfriend and bi-girlfriend. but for now, my hands are going to be busy pleasuring my tits and pussy. Love this fuck-story!!

My man and I read this story together, naked, me on his lap with his huge cock stuffed in my hot, dripping pussy - we fucked and had a few shattering orgasms. This is a great story!!

that story was great,i came and came and came.i couldn't stop shooting cum.i want to read more like this...

OMG!!!!! That was amazing. One of the best stories I have read. I hope to read more from you soon

great story but could have been made more dirty with some more anal action and rimming.