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Old 10-03-2006, 09:21 AM
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You've put a fantasy of mine in words. I loved it!!!

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Si à travers nos veines coule encore le sang...
Si dans les jeux d'enfants on entend encore l'accent...
Si nous sentons encore l'espoir de nos grands-parents...
Si dans les voiles du large souffle encore le vent...
Y'a jamais eu de Grand Dérangement.

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Old 10-03-2006, 09:40 AM
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Oh my god that one was great! Wasn't really thinking I'd be logging on to Pixies this morning with anything but catching up on some of the talk threads but damn, I ended up going off like fireworks on the 4th of July. What I wouldn't give to get to participate in a scene like that one!
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Old 10-03-2006, 10:54 AM
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Dang Lou..... that was some story!! Now I'm sitting here all constrained in my jeans..... Mrs Coaster may be thanking you soon!!!

Thanks for this very sensual story!
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Old 10-03-2006, 02:20 PM
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Between the two guys on her while he was her ...


Wow!!!

But when that young dude did that to her cum soaked , well



Great story! Dead sexy!
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Old 10-03-2006, 04:43 PM
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Wow Lou that's a hot one, it had me so hard and hot. Thanks for posting it.
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Old 10-03-2006, 06:17 PM
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I only got through 1/2 of it before I had to run out the door this morning and I was in fantasy land all the way to work. Fab Lou.
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Old 10-04-2006, 02:03 AM
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Glad you all liked it.

The ideas have been knocking around in my head for quite some time, and I thought it was finally time to commit them to paper, as it were.

Has been a long time since I wrote anything like this, so I was a little nervous about doing something quite so full-on, but then again, I'm amongst friends so I thought 'what the heck?'

Thanks for the kind words!

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Old 10-05-2006, 03:16 AM
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'kin HOT, girl!!

A story which appealed to my baser side (hope that's the right spelling!!) but not too overboard, if you know what I mean.

Perfect.

DM


Feeling the urge to "pick up the pen" again myself........ thanks sweetie!

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Old 10-05-2006, 11:18 AM
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So I had already cum twice the other day and then I saw what people were saying about this story, so I started reading it right before heading home... and ended up coming a third time. Then as I was trying to get to sleep that night, memories of your story came to mind and I brought myself to a fourth 'O' because of it.

So yeah... great story Lou!
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holy cow that was hot...sooo dirty.

nice job, lou!
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Holy crap. That was so fucking hot.
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Old 05-10-2007, 06:21 AM
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Hehehehe *blushes*

Who'd have thought so many people would share my fascination with such a filthy scenario?!

I'm so glad that at least some people don't think it's tooooo full-on.


Fussy hasn't read it, thank goodness - I think he'd be shocked! LOL
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