Since I hadn't seen any feedback for
Partying with Mom , I thought I would post some.
Good story! I won't generally comment on a story I don't like, and I liked this one. Rather hot!
The only changes I would make would be to remove the bit about mom getting pregnant. I've been around pregnant women, and there really isn't anything erotic about it.
I might also add an oral sex scene, and possibly a bit where someone walks in and joins them, like that girl who seemed to want to be with him, but those are minor points.
Overall, very good story!