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Old 02-23-2005, 12:03 AM
NastyGuy NastyGuy is offline
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Feedback on "Partying with Mom"

Since I hadn't seen any feedback for Partying with Mom , I thought I would post some.

Good story! I won't generally comment on a story I don't like, and I liked this one. Rather hot!

The only changes I would make would be to remove the bit about mom getting pregnant. I've been around pregnant women, and there really isn't anything erotic about it.

I might also add an oral sex scene, and possibly a bit where someone walks in and joins them, like that girl who seemed to want to be with him, but those are minor points.

Overall, very good story!
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