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Old 03-02-2005, 01:01 PM
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Feedback on "My dream comes home"

I would love to hear your feedback and opinions! If you have critisism, please keep it constructive and/or polite. Thanks all!


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Old 03-02-2005, 01:30 PM
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No criticism from me... I loved your story! Thank you for sharing it with us
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Old 03-02-2005, 10:56 PM
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Excellent story flywater....would love to be the woman in your story...*winks*
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