
03-01-2005, 01:37 AM
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Missing the Angels
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Join Date: May 2004
Location: South Dakota
Posts: 10,793
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Originally Posted by NastyGuy
Since I hadn't seen any feedback for Partying with Mom , I thought I would post some.
Good story! I won't generally comment on a story I don't like, and I liked this one. Rather hot!
The only changes I would make would be to remove the bit about mom getting pregnant. I've been around pregnant women, and there really isn't anything erotic about it.
I might also add an oral sex scene, and possibly a bit where someone walks in and joins them, like that girl who seemed to want to be with him, but those are minor points.
Overall, very good story!
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I understand that everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but your remark about pregnant women........
I like the story the way it was.
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