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02-05-2005, 09:39 PM

flywater

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Feedbacl on "Unexpected Work"

Please take a min to read my newest work, would really love feedback and constructive critisism! Thank you all! it is in Boy/Girl stories. Thank you all!

Unexpected work

02-06-2005, 09:51 PM

imaginewithme imaginewithme is offline

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That's a wonderful story!!!! Great work flywater!

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02-14-2005, 09:48 AM

Stolen Kisses Stolen Kisses is offline

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Flywater,

Great story. I really liked that the whole story was being told to "her". Cant wait to ready more of your stuff.

Barb

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