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flywater

02-05-2005 09:39 PM

Feedbacl on "Unexpected Work"

Please take a min to read my newest work, would really love feedback and constructive critisism! Thank you all! it is in Boy/Girl stories. Thank you all!

Unexpected work

imaginewithme

02-06-2005 09:51 PM

That's a wonderful story!!!! Great work flywater!

Stolen Kisses

02-14-2005 09:48 AM

Flywater,

Great story. I really liked that the whole story was being told to "her". Cant wait to ready more of your stuff.

Barb

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