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Old 04-25-2005, 05:37 PM
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Feedback on "Me and Monica's interesting evening" by Silver Surfer

Me and Monica's interesting evening is a good short story, folks. There are 4 principle characters, although only 3 have sex.

My only other comment is that I would like to see it lengthened--either through a rewrite that explains some of what happened later that evening, or perhaps through a sequel.

Silver Surfer done good with this one.
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Old 06-04-2005, 02:50 PM
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Thank you for those nice comments. I guess we all have things that we would like to see lengthened
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