
04-25-2005, 05:37 PM
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Feedback on "Me and Monica's interesting evening" by Silver Surfer
Me and Monica's interesting evening is a good short story, folks. There are 4 principle characters, although only 3 have sex.
My only other comment is that I would like to see it lengthened--either through a rewrite that explains some of what happened later that evening, or perhaps through a sequel.
Silver Surfer done good with this one.
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