Feedback on "Me and Monica's interesting evening" by Silver Surfer
 

Me and Monica's interesting evening is a good short story, folks. There are 4 principle characters, although only 3 have sex.

My only other comment is that I would like to see it lengthened--either through a rewrite that explains some of what happened later that evening, or perhaps through a sequel.

Silver Surfer done good with this one.

Thank you for those nice comments. I guess we all have things that we would like to see lengthened ;)