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Old 09-08-2006, 06:38 PM
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Excellent story of a chance encounter. Good job pascal!

Read it here.
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Old 09-09-2006, 04:36 PM
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Excellent story of a chance encounter. Good job pascal!

Read it here.


Thank you very much Aqua. A first attempt, so hopefully i will improve with practice.
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Old 09-09-2006, 08:27 PM
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yup....love the eye contact stuff, too. nice touch. terrific short story!

there's nowhere to go but...uhm... up.
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Old 09-11-2006, 04:32 PM
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i better start working on that up bit next, lol

and thank you
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