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Aqua	09-08-2006 06:38 PM

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Excellent story of a chance encounter. Good job pascal!

Read it here.

pascal

09-09-2006 04:36 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aqua

Excellent story of a chance encounter. Good job pascal!

Read it here.

Thank you very much Aqua. A first attempt, so hopefully i will improve with practice.

wyndhy

09-09-2006 08:27 PM

yup....love the eye contact stuff, too. nice touch. terrific short story!

there's nowhere to go but...uhm... up. :D

pascal

09-11-2006 04:32 PM

:) i better start working on that up bit next, lol

and thank you

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