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Old 03-09-2005, 09:11 PM
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Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
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Old 03-10-2005, 11:57 AM
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thought i might add the why-fors

it's somewhat dark--like sex and love can be--i loved that about it, and very expressive. it's metre mirrors this as well; reading a few words or sentences of what seems to be basic prose and then getting hit with several harsh cadences, one after the other, punctuated the feel of the poem.

nice bit of writing there, anxioushussy.
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Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
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Old 03-10-2005, 10:37 PM
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Thanks.

*smiles*

It's nice to actually get feedback, especially when it was least expected. I just felt like posting it. =)

I appreciate it though!
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