I'm Sitting Here... ~ AnxiousHussy
 

thought i might add the why-fors

it's somewhat dark--like sex and love can be--i loved that about it, and very expressive. it's metre mirrors this as well; reading a few words or sentences of what seems to be basic prose and then getting hit with several harsh cadences, one after the other, punctuated the feel of the poem.

nice bit of writing there, anxioushussy.

Thanks.

*smiles*

It's nice to actually get feedback, especially when it was least expected. I just felt like posting it. =)

I appreciate it though!