Feedback on "Partying with Mom"

[NastyGuy]

Since I hadn't seen any feedback for Partying with Mom (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=17279) , I thought I would post some.

Good story! I won't generally comment on a story I don't like, and I liked this one. Rather hot!

The only changes I would make would be to remove the bit about mom getting pregnant. I've been around pregnant women, and there really isn't anything erotic about it.

I might also add an oral sex scene, and possibly a bit where someone walks in and joins them, like that girl who seemed to want to be with him, but those are minor points.

Overall, very good story!

[Bobs mind]

Since I hadn't seen any feedback for Partying with Mom (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=17279) , I thought I would post some.

Good story! I won't generally comment on a story I don't like, and I liked this one. Rather hot!

The only changes I would make would be to remove the bit about mom getting pregnant. I've been around pregnant women, and there really isn't anything erotic about it.

I might also add an oral sex scene, and possibly a bit where someone walks in and joins them, like that girl who seemed to want to be with him, but those are minor points.

Overall, very good story!
Pretty good fucking mom stories luv Them

[sodaklostsoul]

Since I hadn't seen any feedback for Partying with Mom (http://www.pixies-place.com:81/forums/showthread.php?t=17279) , I thought I would post some.

Good story! I won't generally comment on a story I don't like, and I liked this one. Rather hot!

The only changes I would make would be to remove the bit about mom getting pregnant. I've been around pregnant women, and there really isn't anything erotic about it.

I might also add an oral sex scene, and possibly a bit where someone walks in and joins them, like that girl who seemed to want to be with him, but those are minor points.

Overall, very good story!
I understand that everyone is entitled to their own opinion, but your remark about pregnant women........ :hair:

I like the story the way it was.