Live Chat

Go Back   Pixies Place Forums > Erotic Stories > Erotic Story Feedback
User Name
Password


Reply
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Rate Thread Display Modes
  #1  
Old 01-24-2007, 05:32 PM
Lilith's Avatar
Lilith Lilith is offline
♦*♥Moderatrix♥*♦
 
Join Date: Nov 2001
Location: on top of it all
Posts: 50,568
Send a message via Yahoo to Lilith
Hypothetically Speaking

I'd love to be the vixen.

Truly a hot tail... er I mean some kind'a hot tale
__________________

The practice of putting women on pedestals began to die out when it was discovered that they could give orders better from there.~ Betty Grable

If I wanted your opinion, I'd remove the duct tape and ask you for it.~ Me
<~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>
One man's dream is another man's nightmare~~~~> §¤ Lilith ¤§

~>My Scribbles<~
==>Gone Shopping<== ~Just a Quickie~ *~A Celebration Vacation~* ~Surprises~ Sleeping With the Window Open
What Did You Do Today? Self Defense Class ~Short Sweet Snippets~ § Summer Spin § Story Challenge Submission Pajamas
Reply With Quote
  #2  
Old 01-25-2007, 09:35 AM
wyndhy's Avatar
wyndhy wyndhy is offline
pixie of the wood
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
Send a message via Yahoo to wyndhy
i wonder if there's any guys...friends maybe...who'd want to be the two guys you'd vixenize.


thanks again ((lil)). it always gives me nice warm fuzzies when someone tells me they enjoyed a story.
__________________
Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
Reply With Quote
  #3  
Old 01-25-2007, 10:34 AM
IowaMan's Avatar
IowaMan IowaMan is offline
Leo was right
 
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Eastern Iowa
Posts: 17,778
Suppose I just read your story wyndhy, I'd be hard as a rock. Hypothetically speaking of course.

Could I be coaxed into something like that? Hmmmmmm, let me give that one some thought.
__________________
It takes a gutless mouse to play only when the cat's away.

No love, no friendship, can cross the path of our destiny without leaving some mark on it forever. ~~ Francois Mocuriac

Confucius say, "He who masturbate into cash register come into money."

An optimist looks at the glass and says it's half full. A pessimist looks at the glass and says it's half empty. A Cubs fan looks at the glass and says, "When's it gonna spill?"

Deus Impetitio Esuritori Nullus
Reply With Quote
  #4  
Old 01-25-2007, 01:56 PM
wyndhy's Avatar
wyndhy wyndhy is offline
pixie of the wood
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
Send a message via Yahoo to wyndhy
think long and think hard, iowa.


and thanks for reading!!
__________________
Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
Reply With Quote
  #5  
Old 01-25-2007, 02:59 PM
Coaster's Avatar
Coaster Coaster is offline
Not there yet.....
 
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: NE USA
Posts: 19,794
Mmmmmmmmm... wyndhy.... could you sit on me like in your AV?

Great tail milkmaid!!!
__________________
My Only Two Stories Anywhere!

Afternoon Delight

Delightful Rendezvous!

Is the love I gave her in the past, gonna be enough to last, if tomorrow never comes........
Reply With Quote
  #6  
Old 01-25-2007, 03:06 PM
Irezumi Kiss's Avatar
Irezumi Kiss Irezumi Kiss is offline
Sin Diesel
 
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Brooklyn, NYC
Posts: 1,338
Hypothetically speaking, after a cock-hardening tale like that, I might need some hypodermically speaking attention...

...oh nurrrrse...
__________________
Latrevo ta megala stithi!

"When men worship me because of my breasts, I feel that I am an embodiment of the goddess that has become...a part of our collective human soul." — Chloe Vevrier

IrezumiKiss' "Erotique Nonstop" — original, libertine, dirty drawings for your pleasure:
FINALLY updated! 5/6/08
More 5/6/08


Irezumi Kiss' Library.com Page - a comprehensive listing of my bibliophilic erotic inspirations & other readin's whut I digs

Reply With Quote
  #7  
Old 01-25-2007, 04:44 PM
wyndhy's Avatar
wyndhy wyndhy is offline
pixie of the wood
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
Send a message via Yahoo to wyndhy
mmmm. i'm gettin those warm fuzzies again.

thank you, boys!!
__________________
Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
Reply With Quote
  #8  
Old 02-11-2007, 07:07 PM
osuche's Avatar
osuche osuche is offline
Loungin' Around
 
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: West Coast
Posts: 30,587
Story was awesome! Thank you...
__________________
Life is too short not to love and be loved....preferably multiple times in one night.

I think men talk to women so they can sleep with them and women sleep with men so they can talk to them. ~ Jay McInerney

Reply With Quote
  #9  
Old 02-12-2007, 09:59 AM
wyndhy's Avatar
wyndhy wyndhy is offline
pixie of the wood
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
Send a message via Yahoo to wyndhy
very cool! thanks, osuche. *x*

i must admit, i'm super happy (and relieved) a few people liked it. sometimes...well usually ...i write stuff that makes perfect sense in my head (especially when i experiment with non-traditional POV’s or do this "talking directly to the reader" thing i’ve been into with my last couple stories) and as i'm writing it, i'm positive that the tone that i tried to convey came across well, but when i go back to it later, i'm not so sure that i didn't just make it a really shitty story or one that's just plain too hard to read; like things i thought were obvious or funny or sensible that just ended up lost and confused in my characteristic over-use of punctuation, run-on sentences, and common speech syntax as opposed to the “rules of proper grammar."

as always, for those of you not so impressed, criticism is welcome...nae! encouraged. except for the typos ...i wish i were better at proofing my own stuff but i'm going to make a better effort at it in the future, take more time with my writing and not just put it on paper as fast as i can 'cause it feels like this frenzied race to get it all out of my head...like i'm afraid i'll forget what i wanted to type. and i will really read it over in as much of an unattached manor as i can manage...maybe step away from it for a few days before i come back to proof...no matter how much it barks at the doggie-door of my brain.


shiii...i'm not even sure that ^^^ made sense ...and - as usual - i wrote too much.
__________________
Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
Reply With Quote
  #10  
Old 02-12-2007, 04:01 PM
WildIrish's Avatar
WildIrish WildIrish is offline
is not this trim anymore!
 
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: New England
Posts: 21,709
Ok...that works for me.


Now, about this carpet.
__________________
Though I am different from you,
We were born involved in one another.


For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.

Complete surrender should not just come at moments in which one faces overwhelming odds, but in the calm when it seems one is personally in complete control of one's life.
Reply With Quote
  #11  
Old 02-12-2007, 05:12 PM
wyndhy's Avatar
wyndhy wyndhy is offline
pixie of the wood
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
Send a message via Yahoo to wyndhy
can't help ya there.

glad you enjoyed, WI. thanks!
__________________
Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
Reply With Quote
  #12  
Old 07-16-2010, 09:49 AM
cellaphanepants cellaphanepants is offline
Dare to Read, Dear
 
Join Date: Aug 2006
Posts: 141
Outstanding!

I don't know why this is the first time I've read this story. I've read others of yours, but none have floored me, or made me rise, like this one.

Maybe it was the meter, or the pace at which it read, but my heart was beating fast, sweat was beading on my forehead, and my breathe came in gasps and chills with the multiple orgasms of my mind.

Brava!

You do have a way with words.
__________________
Kinda like my old blue tick hound I like to lay around in the shade. I ain't got no money, but I damn sure got it made.
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old 07-16-2010, 11:37 AM
wyndhy's Avatar
wyndhy wyndhy is offline
pixie of the wood
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
Send a message via Yahoo to wyndhy
aw shucks. thanks!
__________________
Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
Reply With Quote
  #14  
Old 07-16-2010, 12:53 PM
Aqua's Avatar
Aqua Aqua is offline
Manwhore
 
Join Date: Jan 2002
Location: Pacific Northwest
Posts: 15,495
I confess, I don't recall reading this story before... and damn I think I'd remember if I had, so I must have missed it.

I loved this line...
Quote:
He’d prod her with the distended crown of his up-til-now denied cock, using twists and pivots that’d make Elvis look like Ed Grimley.....I must say.



Humor aside... story!
__________________
Put me on wheels and I'll turn tricks.

Clever? Nah, I ran out of that years ago. But if you find this, let me know, k?
"The road goes ever on..." ~ Tolkien

In memory of my friend skip...
Go then, there are other worlds than these
Reply With Quote
  #15  
Old 07-16-2010, 06:29 PM
wyndhy's Avatar
wyndhy wyndhy is offline
pixie of the wood
 
Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
Send a message via Yahoo to wyndhy
hehe. i remember snorting when i wrote that. i am sooooo glad you thought it was sexy but i absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE that it made you laugh.
__________________
Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose
Reply With Quote
Reply


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes Rate This Thread
Rate This Thread:

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -5. The time now is 08:02 PM.


Powered by: vBulletin Version 3.0.10
Copyright ©2000 - 2025, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.