Hi all,

I would appreciate any comments or suggestions on my story writing. For those of you who haven't read it yet, it's in Boy/Girl and called.....you guessed it.....Bitten!


Bitten

I read it. Nice work.

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Very nice. I enjoyed it. :]

Thanks Lilith and Sassee. I appreciate your comments.

I enjoyed your story too. I could imagine the kitchen and the two lovers... It worked for me, and would love a part 2

Thanks Tkarvelis, Maybe there will be a part 2.