The Priest's Tale

I like this one just a teensy tiny bit I think you captured the urgent yet calculated risk the delicious, demonic antagonist makes to take what she desires. Poor poor Father D. Good thing his name suits him

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I wholeheartedly concur with Lilith, a great story!!

Delicous!

I enjoyed it very much. Dark, sinister, yet appealing and extremely well written.

I am currently doing a short story of a college co-ed who temps her local priest in the confessional and over time, draws him in so that she can have her way with him on the altar!

I guess this theme is a favorite! No demonic elements in my story tho. Just succulent nubile flesh drawing in the poor victim.