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Great story! When I read the line "charge of the lust brigade" I nearly shot iced tea out my nose!

Thanks for sharing it with us!

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Yep, excellent story ... I especially enjoyed the underlying humor going through the entirety. Welcome to Pixies!

Thanks so much guys, I am always a little nervous about others reading my work, but want to get feedback so that I can improve!

I love your site, it is erotic fiction heaven! I feel like a child in a Candies 'R Us! Lol! Don't know where to start, and want to read everything at once!

Thanks again for the encouragement!

yep, yep! great story, roxie

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Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose

Thanks Wyndhy,

I appreciate you taking the time to respond, and am very glad you liked it!

Cheers,

Roxi