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Old 05-06-2004, 12:29 PM
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Summer Spin by Lilith

Sexy and hot foursome fun! A good description of fun flirting between married couples, but even better is the sexy game of spin the bottle. Good job babes!!

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Old 05-06-2004, 12:37 PM
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Second pair of undies ruined in two days...I don't know how much longer I can afford this site.

Great story. Tension built up, hidden desires, coy teasing and outright lust! Loved it. Thanks!
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Old 05-06-2004, 10:41 PM
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Aqua~ TYVM!!!!! but you are biased


WI~ put em' on my tab Thanks for your kind words.
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Old 05-07-2004, 12:05 PM
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Aqua~ TYVM!!!!! but you are biased

And who's fault is that Miss oh-so-sexy!
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Old 05-07-2004, 01:53 PM
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I'm not biased....and I really enjoyed it. Definately shiver making. Gotta go find me a bottle .
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Old 05-08-2004, 09:19 AM
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Loved your story.... Hell, I can't wait until next summer for the follow up... ha ha
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Old 05-19-2004, 01:58 PM
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Lil, some excellent writing here...made me imagine what it would be like to be in that situation! Hot, wild, lusty sex....incredible!


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Old 06-27-2007, 09:00 AM
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Exciting and hot Miss Lil! I so wanted to be one of the guys...... when are you & Mr Lil going on vacation?
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Old 08-24-2007, 06:06 AM
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ive just recovered from my "session" as i read this story, and it was fantastic. now i need to shower, Lilith's excellent passionate writing made me squirt a fair bit and there's no man here to lick my sticky thighs clean

*sigh* maybe my good old friend Mr ShowerHead is feeling horny...
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Old 08-24-2007, 03:43 PM
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Thanks Emzo! Ans all of you with kind words for my scribbles. I wish I had more time to write and play.
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Old 08-24-2007, 06:04 PM
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I wish I had more time to write and play.


You're not the only one!
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Old 08-27-2007, 07:46 AM
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ive just recovered from my "session" as i read this story, and it was fantastic. now i need to shower, Lilith's excellent passionate writing made me squirt a fair bit and there's no man here to lick my sticky thighs clean

*sigh* maybe my good old friend Mr ShowerHead is feeling horny...



that's a shame - if i knew where you were i'd offer up my services as thigh-licker... ;-)

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Great story.
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Old 10-09-2007, 06:39 PM
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Nice

I liked it too.
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Old 10-13-2007, 10:04 PM
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Thanks. I'm glad you all liked it.
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One man's dream is another man's nightmare~~~~> §¤ Lilith ¤§

~>My Scribbles<~
==>Gone Shopping<== ~Just a Quickie~ *~A Celebration Vacation~* ~Surprises~ Sleeping With the Window Open
What Did You Do Today? Self Defense Class ~Short Sweet Snippets~ § Summer Spin § Story Challenge Submission Pajamas
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