Fabulous!!!!!


I really liked your very relaxed style of writing. It seemed honest and true, nothing seemed forced or inplausible. Loved the thought you leave us with. Lovely!

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Thank you very much Lilith. You are too kind. It's sort of a love letter to a former lover and, in essence. true. My next story will be far more fictionalized but I will try for the same realistic tone.

Thanks again

NIK

The last line was beautiful.

That was a great story! Erotic..hot and tender all at the same time! Wonderfull job!

~Eliza

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And the wicked wind whispers and moans.
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Well, I got a few of my own"
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