
06-27-2004, 05:08 AM
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It wasn't me!!!
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Fantastic
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06-28-2004, 11:38 AM
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Awwwww....thank you boilergirl1, I encourage you to do the same...isn't vegas sorta nice? hehehehe....love you too
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06-28-2004, 12:46 PM
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yada, yada, yada
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Wow! Helluva hot poem there Jen!
Hope you have a few more in your portfolio to share!
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06-29-2004, 12:24 AM
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Thanks, Musketeer and Darogle, it's nice to have a bit of feedback.
I'm sure that i can come up with some more at some point or another. Goodness knows this site inspires.
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06-29-2004, 03:53 PM
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My Angel
Feather soft kisses
Raining down on bare skin,
Pausing at an earlobe
tugging gently,
Kissing down the nape of a neck
lightly caressing a pale shoulder,
Pausing at each tender breast
Sucking, nibbling and squeezing
Until I can hardly breath,
Kissing down a smooth stomach
down between my thighs,
drinking in , savoring my very essence.
As we become one,
minds mingle and
bodies meld.......
I close my eyes and lose myself
In the music of heaven.
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06-29-2004, 08:29 PM
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Learning to talk sexy
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wonderful addition Pussy Willow!
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06-30-2004, 10:36 AM
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Beautiful! Very gentle, yet complete.
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07-02-2004, 06:10 AM
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Rollercoasters ROCK!!!!!!
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says it all
which is very wonderful. please keep em' cumming ladies 
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07-02-2004, 06:35 AM
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words work wonders
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~ Jen ~
What a superb piece of prose. Loved it, nice detail, and imagery. Keep it up and please post some more.
~ thereIam ~
~ boilergirl1 ~
~ musketeer ~
~ darogle ~
thank you for the encouragements and for sharing in what is becoming a delightful thread.
~ Pussy Willow ~
I followed the path all the way to ‘music of heaven’ please continue your story

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07-04-2004, 09:19 PM
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Rollercoasters ROCK!!!!!!
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bump!!!!!!
this is worth the read 
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07-04-2004, 09:39 PM
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Rollercoasters ROCK!!!!!!
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bump
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07-10-2004, 07:03 PM
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Vanilla Milkshake
Such a craving
you might fullfill.
A vanilla milkshake
thick, creamy
slowly oozing
down my throat;
sticks to my lips
lingers on my tongue
but most falls
down to my belly
leaving me yearning for more.
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09-07-2006, 11:54 AM
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Awesome on my Own
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~*bump*~
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09-12-2006, 06:45 PM
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Quote:
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Originally Posted by Jessy19
Vanilla Milkshake
Such a craving
you might fullfill.
A vanilla milkshake
thick, creamy
slowly oozing
down my throat;
sticks to my lips
lingers on my tongue
but most falls
down to my belly
leaving me yearning for more.
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That is so fuckin erotic!
Love it!
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