08-16-2002, 11:35 PM
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Good job tiger....I'm proud of you!.....didn't know ya had it in ya....hope to see more!
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08-16-2002, 11:42 PM
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Seductress
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Whitetiger, FussyPucker and Midnight Kiss.......beautiful poems....
and quisath......how true.....
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"In love there are no rules".......Bono
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08-17-2002, 12:11 AM
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Pixie's Wild Rose
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Absolutely beautiful poems everyone...I have some as well and will post them tomorrow 
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08-17-2002, 08:38 AM
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These were written by a very close friend of mine. The weird thing is, he's only 14, and he's been around more than I have.... Explains this kind of thing.
A Toast To The Darkness In Our Souls
Twisted beyond recognition by toil
Did you pray for no such ending,
Or do you lie with your being,
And not just your facile mouth?
Does it haunt you at night, blistering,
Your dreams a weaving tapestry
Of what you could have had,
As opposed to what you have spawned.
A wreck, I told you I was.
A quivering mass of nerves.
Did you choose which string to pluck?
You play me like a tightly strung violin.
Yet I care not, after all.
I love every minute of it,
As much as I am enamoured of you.
No one else could have affected me.
You took what I was, the mixed up ingredients,
And bound them together. You made me.
All that I am, all potential, is from you.
You are more than a goddess to me.
They say we are kindred spirits,
Two beings so alike as to be uncanny.
Yet that is not so my love.
We are as one.
You yourself are the cause,
The root from which I spring.
This silvered verse befits you not,
As little as it befits the world.
You cannot decieve me.
Our love for each other is whole.
I know you lie to me not.
Your word is my heart.
No, I don't get it either. But he's just getting over shizophrenia and bipola, so I excuse him.
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Life twists the perceptions, it claims you are immune to its charms. The hold on your soul is one of fear. Life is a slut.
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08-17-2002, 10:01 AM
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That is a wonderfully awsome poem, and to have come from only a 14 year old..............................
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08-17-2002, 10:02 AM
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This should most likely got in the sing to me thread but decided topost it here instead.
Alice Cooper -- IT'S ONLY MY HEART TALKING
Anybody's dream can fall apart
Anybody's mask can break
Couldn't tell you how I wanted
you
Enough to make you want to stay
I never said the words out loud
I guess I couldn't get 'em straight
Baby, give me one more chance
Before you walk away
It's only, only, only, only my heart
talkin'
Yeah, it's only, only, only, only my
heart talkin'
Sayin' things I never thought I'd
say
Can't you hear me knocking
Tried to fool you but it wouldn't
play
Cuz my heart it's talkin', it's talkin'
Baby, it's talkin'
Talkin' to you
Everytime I take it to the edge
Everytime I'm so afraid
Don't you know I cry my eyes
out, babe
Everytime you look away
Oh, I almost dropped a tear
But I caught it just in time
I'd say those things you want to
hear
If you'd help me, help me, help
me try
It's only, only, only, only my heart
talkin'
Yeah, it's only, only, only, only my
heart talkin'
Sayin' things I never thought I'd
say
Can't you hear me knocking
Tried to fool you but it wouldn't
play
Cuz my heart it's talkin', it's talkin'
Baby, it's talkin'
Talkin' to you
Well, I don't want to hide away
Hide away without you, baby
Don't you go and run away
Come and help me, baby
Just a little help, baby
Oh, my little baby
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08-17-2002, 10:45 AM
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Pixie's Wild Rose
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Together
Walking along the lake shore, we watch the beautiful sun set.
As we stroll hand in hand, we celebrate the day that we met.
The moon is brightly shining, the stars glitter in the night.
It seems when I am with you, everything will be all right.
As the clouds slowly move in, life has offered us a chance.
With the crickets as our music, beneath the sky we dance.
The rain starts to pour down, laughing we run for cover.
I look into your eyes and whisper, “I want to be your lover.”
Outside the thunder rolls, we watch the lightning strike.
We snuggle close together, as your arms hold me tight.
~This is one of mine~ Sassy Rose
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08-17-2002, 10:48 AM
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That is beautiful Sassy Rose. You have a real talent.
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08-17-2002, 10:54 AM
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Pixie's Wild Rose
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Together
Walking along the lake shore, we watch the beautiful sun set.
As we stroll hand in hand, we celebrate the day that we met.
The moon is brightly shining, the stars glitter in the night.
It seems when I am with you, everything will be all right.
As the clouds slowly move in, life has offered us a chance.
With the crickets as our music, beneath the sky we dance.
The rain starts to pour down, laughing we run for cover.
I look into your eyes and whisper, “I want to be your lover.”
Outside the thunder rolls, we watch the lightning strike.
We snuggle close together, as your arms hold me tight.
~This is one of mine~ Sassy Rose
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08-17-2002, 10:56 AM
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Pixie's Wild Rose
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OOPS, not sure what happened there or how that post came in twice.....sorry all.
Thank you Midnight Kiss, poetry is something I enjoy when I'm inspired
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08-17-2002, 01:16 PM
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Location: North Australia
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My grandparents held hands as they walked and were totally
in love into their late 80s.
I've been kicked by love and survived it, as having it is better than not.
You just have to be a little picky in who you "let in".
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08-17-2002, 01:42 PM
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Pixie's Wild Rose
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Forbidden Dance
It started with a dance
We wanted so much more
It led to a kiss
Which opened up a door
We were lost in the moment
The stars in the sky
Holding one another
Looking in your eyes
We live separate lives
Yet, we lie on the covers
We know that we should stop
But we’re tempted to be lovers
Not knowing where this leads
We take it day by day
Moments with you cherished
I wish that I could stay
Every time we come together
We know that we must part
It matters not what happens
You remain within my heart
~another of mine~Sassy Rose
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08-17-2002, 09:19 PM
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Thank you all i love to read these Please Keep them coming
sassy Rose ----------- WOW you do have a real talent please more more
nikki ----------------Thank you
Old Fart----------- that is very true everyword
Eldritch------------ 14years WOW i would love to read more of his
thank you all so much
please keep them coming
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08-17-2002, 09:20 PM
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Trust In Dreams
by Allen Jesson
We belong together,
hopefully, for evermore.
I've never been this certain,
I've never been this sure.
So this trip is second time around,
and that has got an historic ring,
but you've got to leave that baggage,
and get a new suitcase to bring.
Because trust just doesn't go one way,
it is a long and two lane street,
it's where love and commitment go,
it's a place where lonely hearts meet.
You know that I love you,
and that our love is strong,
and I promise, with a solemn vow,
I shall never do you wrong.
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08-17-2002, 09:21 PM
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Love Conquers All
Here we are together,
on this our special day,
I love you more than ever,
I love you more than I can say.
We've stayed together,
distance couldn't keep us apart,
joined together by love,
joined together at the heart.
I don't care what others may think,
I know now you are the only one,
you are my evening moonlight,
you are my morning sun.
I love you for who you are,
and not for what you've got.
I love you. Full stop.
No matter what.
I just want you to know,
(and pride does come before a fall),
that I love you now and for always,
and I know that our love will conquer all.
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