10-11-2005, 02:33 PM
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Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: New England
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Feedback on Revenge is sweet by dm383
Ok...you've got my attention.
I like where this is going.
Revenge
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Though I am different from you,
We were born involved in one another.
For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.
Complete surrender should not just come at moments in which one faces overwhelming odds, but in the calm when it seems one is personally in complete control of one's life.
Last edited by fzzy : 10-12-2005 at 02:20 AM.
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