I want to take you (my pleasurable prey) by surprise
So I master the ability to hide the spark in my eyes
You sit on my bed, eyes darting around the room
My room is darkened, an entrancing silent tomb
Your eyes finally catch the blazing in mine
And you read my body for some sort of sign
I smile at your confusion, plans falling into place
A nervous smile begins to creep across your face
You begin to speak and I press my lips to yours
Keeping you from opening any verbal doors
I slide my hands down your beating chest
Until my hand, at your blue jean button, finds rest
With skill and silky movements, I release the bronze disk
And encourage the zipper on its descent, steadily, brisk
Your face lights up with awed excitement
I, so suave, so mysterious, and so content
Grabbing your hips, I slide your pants to the floor
Myself slipping between your knees, inside a fiery core
You prop yourself on a nearby pillow and gaze
I become hungry with a monstrous sexual craze
There it is, your delectable cock, growing
Being sure to keep you always unknowing
I take it in my hand and stroke its inviting shaft
Acting like I'm a master at this art, this craft
Not enough? Oh be sure, I have more planned for you
Easing up on my knees to lick your head, you watch as I do
Now taking more of you into my mouth, slowly teasing
Sucking softly, my tongue caressing, slowly pleasing
Your eyes partly shut ensure that you enjoy
Your breath quickening the more I toy
And then I decide it's time to make you tremble
I speed my pace and take you as deep as possible
My hand moving in rhythm with my mouth
Tongue lashing madly north and south
Intensity increasing, you growing harder, hips rock
Mutual loving, my tongue encircles your throbbing cock
I see your hands ball into fists, ravaging my bed sheet
You will cum, I command it...where lips and shaft meet
A gasp from you, warmth cascading down my throat
Reveling in this moment in time that I wrote
I float up into your arms and press you down on the bed
Your arms wrap around me, light as a black widow's thread
I'll rest here for always, you panting, heart pounding against my breasts
Sleeping in your arms while vivid dreams simmer and manifest

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I use vivid words....but my actions get more of a rise. :devilish:

~*My Poems*~
Ah, So Good
Hungry
It's Your Way

I love how you are able to make so vivid your emotions through words. Very good.

Another excellent poem. Like the previous poster said, you are very vivid in your writing. It brings the page to life and fires the imagination.