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Old 05-16-2005, 01:35 AM
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Dusk To Dawn

Dusk to Dawn

We sit on the deck, at the end of a day..
Watching the sun set, in a lunar display..
The explosion of colors, puts our duties to rest..
My troubles subside, as you curl to my chest..

We divorce from reality, there’s only our touch..
Your lips brush my neck, and it’s almost too much..
I savor your words, as a wine so sweet..
Your touch turns electric, as our eyes come to meet..

Our words trail off, by passion we’re led..
With you in my arms, I walk to the bed..
I lay you down gently, and gaze at your charms..
Our passion increases, as you pull from my arms..

Our needs seems to double, as we’re locked in embrace..
We shed all our clothes, as if in a race..
Our heart beats increase, as we lightly perspire..
Your sweet smell serves only, to increase my desire..

I surrender to your charms, as an act of contrition..
You part your legs slightly, to allow me admission..
Our bodies are locked, in both love, and lust..
Your hips move up slightly, to meet my next thrust..

Our words turn to sounds, as we thrash in the night..
Locked together as one, our passions ignite..
As lust overtakes us, we seek our release..
You relax in my arms, and my world is at peace..

An intrusion of light, starts off a new day..
The feel of you near me, my reason to stay..
The completion you give me, sets me to my task..
I tell you I love you, so you don’t need to ask..



I haven’t done a poem in more years than most of you are alive, lol..So..If this is too over done, let me know..
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Old 05-16-2005, 06:06 AM
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I thought it was lovely! Great job!
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Old 05-16-2005, 08:01 AM
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..So..If this is too over done, let me know..



Not over done at all. Its beautiful !!

Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Old 05-16-2005, 10:09 AM
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Excellent! You should write more often.
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Dubblz, very, very nice! Hope you do more.
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Old 05-18-2005, 10:01 AM
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Wow..Glad you guys like these!!!..Thanks!!..
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