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Old 05-05-2005, 11:32 PM
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Hey White Boy, by Dubblz

Oh yes, please do continue! What a hot story, I totally got into it!

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Hey White Boy-Part 2
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Hey White Boy

Thanks for the positive reply..Part 2 posted..Think I'm going to further refine the style and try a novel next time..Thz Again
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Hey White Boy

Thanks for the positive reply..Part 2 posted..Think I'm going to further refine the style and try a novel next time..Thx Again
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Old 05-09-2005, 09:48 AM
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Part 2 was very good also, I enjoyed it alot! Hot couple, those two, lol
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It's no trick loving somebody at their best. Love is loving them at their worst.
~Tom Stoppard~


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Old 05-09-2005, 02:57 PM
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Thx flutelady,really appreciate the feedback..First novel will be done in true story fashion tho..
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