I must leave feedback for some of the best writing I've ever read in "An Apple for Miss Mindy" in the Interactive/Role-Playing Stories.

Gra(e?)ybread and Jaylene(?) both did a MAGNIFICENT job of relaying this story and making it come alive. And an especial ovation to Graybread for his writing style. You have true talent, sir.

My only constructive critisizm would be the length of the quotations used to solidify the situations. A bit over the top.

I'm not sure if this story is finished or if there will be more adventures with Miss Mindy and Shawn, but, rest assured, I will be awaiting more work from these two authors, whether it be in this scenario or any other.

Bravo.



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