
10-28-2002, 12:43 PM
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Searching for Poets
Calling All Poets
In this creative atmosphere, there have to be some poets here. I am looking for choice poetry to add to my own personal website. If you would like to submit poetry, please let me know. If you would like to read my own poetry, go to http://www.geocities.com/possom20 and click the poetry page link at the bottom of the page. (just hope the mods don't boot me off here for putting my site up there).
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10-28-2002, 10:03 PM
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dark skin dark eyes dark hair/ ring on her lip/ is there one in her clit?/ it makes me wonder/ it makes me ponder/ what she would sound like with me rocking on top her/ making her holler/ she got voices in her head/ I don't care about that/ because I bet she’s wild in bed/ do a strip dance/ give me a lap dance/ make that shit sick/ this bitch is harder than my dick/ I wanna get with her/ I wanna dance with her/ I just wanna hang around and get high with her
sitting here inside my cell ]rotting here inside my hell ]trying hard to forget my past ]telling myself the pain won't last ]i hate the world and don't know why ]i want to change but am afraid to try ]steel and concrete all around ]my ship of freedom has run aground ]is serving time to be my fate? ]fighting here with others hate ]alone and scared in a world this size ]i long to be lost in my lovers eyes ]someday i'll soar, some day i'll fly ]someday i may just break down and cry ]i struggle on ]i continue to fight ]i look for an end ]but theres none in sight
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10-29-2002, 09:34 AM
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Twist, thanks, but um....I'm looking for something a little softer. Your work is good, but a little too twisted for the site I was wanting to post on.
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10-29-2002, 10:46 AM
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Hey possom20. I've only written 2 things, both for the woman of my dreams  I don't know much about poetry...tempo, rhythm, rhyming...so I don't know if this falls squarely into the realm of poetic writing, but I thought I'd throw it out there and see if it's at all interesting to anyone....
You are the coming evenings first star,
The celestial body on which I wish my
Universe of desires,
A new light born from darkness,
A pinpoint of heavenly fire that
Warms my heart and brightens my soul.
and the other...
I was walking last night, just as the sun was setting, turning the horizon a
mellon hue...as I approaching a small field on the side of the road a
fog began to rise. At first it seemed to be reaching out with tendrils like
silk blowing in the wind, but as it grew it began to surround me, capturing me
in its invisible grasp. As I stood there in its misty cage, it began to rise and
fall like a blanketed lover breathing under vague moonlight.
Moving. Silent. Unaware of my watching...
It made me think of you....
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10-29-2002, 11:05 AM
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~*Forget Me Not*~
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There are Romantics out there!!!
Excellent Soulminer! What lady wouldn't want to have something like that written for her!!!
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10-29-2002, 05:00 PM
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OK, Here's one of mine, (Diva, do you how lucky you are to have
such a sensitive, romantic guy ?????)
Kindred Spirits
Kindred Spirits are we
Who share one another's soul
We know the fears
Unspoken
We know the tears
Unshed
A look in the eye,
A touch of the hand,
And all is said,
Without words.
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10-29-2002, 05:02 PM
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Soulminer, you touched my soul.........
Your poems were so beautiful
Thank you sharing !!!!!
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10-30-2002, 09:37 AM
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Soulminer, thanks. Spectacular poems. I will post them on my site ASAP. You can see them at www.geocities.com/possom20 and click the link for my poetry page at the bottom of that page.
P.W.-- Thank you also. I like yours very much and will also post it.
Just hope that I can find some more creative minds in here who aren't hiding their work. I feel my poetry is a release, and know how deep inside poetry can run. It comes from the soul of one, and touches the souls of others.
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10-31-2002, 01:56 PM
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Thanks LD, PW (Your poem is LOVELY) and Possum...
I am flattered.
I don't think myself poetic, but when you have the love of
the most amazing woman in the world and the beauty of
the world around you as inspiration things just seem to
come out all on their own...I'm sure you all can relate!
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11-15-2002, 11:09 AM
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Can anybody say "DEAD THREAD"? Come on folks, I know there's another poet out there somewhere. Help me out here.
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11-15-2002, 04:18 PM
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Here's mine...
Roses are Red
Violets are Blue
You suck me..
and I'll lick you...LMAO
Sorry..had to be done..
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11-15-2002, 07:14 PM
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Learning to talk sexy
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Bone Deep
Feeling your energy bone deep in my soul,
Expression of touch and want and caring.
Knowing things you say with eyes, but never tongue,
and telling me all I need to know -
bone deep in my soul.
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11-17-2002, 02:05 AM
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Eros......A laughing the whole time BITE ME to you. But you're right, somebody had to do it.
Fzzy.....Thanks very much. I like it, it will be posted on my site tonight. You can find the URL to the site in the above posts.
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11-17-2002, 04:40 AM
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Learning to talk sexy
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DD's man - thanks - but on your site you missed printing the last line of the poem - bone deep.
here's another one for you....
Rush to Touch
Feelings rush to touch you
hold you close to me
been so long since I told you
I wanted just to see ....
Language is so fickle
and touch is lost with space,
take me to your feelings
your thoughts form our embrace.
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12-10-2002, 10:06 AM
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fzzy,
Thanks again for another wonderful poem. But I have the poem bone deep just like you have it written above. I copy and paste them so I don't mess it up. If I don't have the last line, what is the last line so I can correct it?
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