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09-03-2001, 12:33 AM

the_phantom the_phantom is offline

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Who Was It

Well I finally got my first story into Pixies-Place.

Please let me know what you think, I have a few more but would like to hear some feedback to make sure I am on the right path.

Thanks in advance

Phantom

10-17-2001, 03:50 PM

X Girl

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My God,
That was perfect.
X Girl

12-15-2001, 10:32 AM

thedarkangel thedarkangel is offline

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loved it

LOVED the story phantom. Definitely made me hott.

03-15-2002, 11:34 PM

dobbydog

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PHantom

Good job. Suspense, not coarse, still had the elements of conquest and control, in a semi-sweet context. Sexy and arousing, nice ending.

03-15-2002, 11:35 PM

dobbydog

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Just did this. Please check my posted comments. Nice job. - Masterstyr

08-14-2002, 11:52 AM

hidinfreak

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i lovedit i only wishthat would ahppen tomeon a stromie night

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