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Old 06-02-2005, 10:21 PM
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Whip Me, Beat Me, But Please, Please, EAT ME

Whip Me, Beat Me, But Please, Please, Eat Me..

We lay on the bed, of our sex life we talked..
We’d try to go farther, but always we’d balk..
A need to explore, our secrets and desires..
The only way left, to ignite our inner fires..

We’d need to be open, the ultimate trust..
To really be free, to explore our real lust..
We’d watched many movies, with different positions..
But they never touched on, my real inhibitions..

I gathered my courage, and spoke without refrain..
I talked of giving her, pleasure, through light doses of pain..
I spoke of code words, and signals to stop..
If the pain was too much, and went over the top..

She said she’d agree, if I agreed too..
If between her tits I fucked her, until I did spew..
She gazed at me kindly, I was truly perplexed..
Our relationship would ride, on a night of rough sex..

Our kiss started softly, but became almost rude..
I ripped off her teddy, until she lay nude..
My manhood was rising, at an even greater pace..
I pinned her to the bed, and let it throb on her face..

Her face showed concern, as the cuffs bound her hands..
Then relief, as she saw, that mink laced the bands..
Quite innocent she looked, as my hands found her breasts..
Tucked my manhood between them, in a cradle it rest..

Her nipples erected, to my pinch, she did groan..
As forward I stroked, my throat gave out a moan..
I paced myself slowly, her sweat was our lube..
Her tongue reached out deftly, and danced on my tube..

My passion now peaking, and cumming I must..
I spewed forth my manhood, with one final thrust..
Lines of my seed, stained her chest, and her face..
I rubbed it in gently, not leaving a trace..

I gazed down to her mound, it needed attention..
She needn’t fight back, in her mink lined retentions..
I teased her mound sweetly, as her voice raised in pitch..
I reached into the nightstand, and pulled out a switch..

I vanquished her body, on my tongue she did ride..
As lightly the oak switch, over her stomach, did glide..
I spread her wet labia, as her body did twitch..
Then lightly came down, the first strike of the switch..

I looked in her eyes, to check for concern
Instead she bade me onward, as her passion did burn..
The next strike was harder, and close to her clit..
Her legs spread still farther, as I watched her submit..

Her body arched up, as the thin oak returned..
My finger lightly probed her, and inside she burned..
She cried to me loudly, My Body’s On Fire!!
As I lashed yet again, the pain turned to desire..

Her body now spewing, it’s own natural juice..
I reached up with the key, and turned her hands loose..
Her face was now anguish, as she reached for my head..
I turned her over roughly, face down on the bed..

I cuffed her again, as her body still writhed..
As my tongue spread her ass cheeks, her objections did subside..
To the nightstand I went, and a paddle, I found..
I gazed down at her ass, so firm and so round..

I poked at her tunnel, my hands caused a spark..
A loud SMACK filled the room, as the paddle found it’s mark..
I sought with two fingers, in her wetness I glide..
The paddle struck again, to mark the other side..

Her ass turned to redness, all she had was her trust..
As the paddle returned, it was upward, she thrust..
Again I would spank her, I knew she’d be sore..
Out of her mouth she just whispered, Baby, Please, More..

I punished her sweet ass, the redness was bright..
I reached for the lotion, to put an end to her plight..
I kissed her cheeks sweetly, they were hot, and on fire..
My tongue slipped inside her, to quench her desire..

She arched her back to me, her ass to my face..
My fingers reached round her, and found that sweet place..
I moved it up slightly, and found her swollen nub..
As my tongue lapped her juices, my finger did rub..

Her passion rose quickly, as I set my own pace..
She moaned out my name, as she tried fucking my face..
I pinched her clit lightly, and her loins did explode..
I licked at her furiously, taking her load..

We lie back and relax, wrapped only in our arms..
Her redness still showing, highlighted her charms..
We released our frustrations, but not in a fight..
We’ll do this more often, just not every night..


That’s All Folks!!
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Old 06-02-2005, 10:29 PM
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Old 06-02-2005, 10:42 PM
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LOL!!!..Thx
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Old 06-03-2005, 10:17 AM
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Bravo!



I couldn't agree more!! You absolutely nailed it (pardon the pun)
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Old 06-03-2005, 10:23 AM
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Thank You FluteLady..I assure you, it was good for me too..
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Old 06-03-2005, 02:53 PM
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WOW!!!!!!!!
I could almost "feel" the switch as I read this. MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!
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Old 06-03-2005, 03:17 PM
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Wow..CowGirlTease..This is strange..I just watched the vids you posted from a time ago,and was thinking damn near the same thing!!..

It really makes me happy that all of you guys like this one.. My brain was totally obsessed with this,it was soooo easy to write
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Old 06-03-2005, 06:23 PM
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Well you are soooooo good at it.
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Well you are soooooo good at it.



Well,Thank You!!...I might put that in my resume..Oh wait..I'm retired,lol..Pixie's Vixens have inspired my scribblings..You guys get ALL the credit!!

At my age,women get hot flashes..Guys like me, just get racy thoughts,lol
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Old 06-05-2005, 08:12 PM
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Dubblz, I love poetry and yours is very impressive.
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Old 06-05-2005, 09:48 PM
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Thx DB..That's a real compliment..I like the style you write with,too..Want to incorpoarte more of that into what I do in the future..This is all pretty new to me..Other than a few e-cards,I never really did anything like this,so,thx again..
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Old 06-09-2005, 05:17 PM
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Sequel?

I think this one went over better than the others,so I'm going to follow up with another.Need to research the "lifestyle" more though,so it makes sense..
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This was wonderful! Sure got me going I don't think you need to do a lot more research, but that, in itself, can be lots of fun.
Keep up the good work....I'll be watching this thread for more..........oh yes, I'll be watching very closely.
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This was wonderful! Sure got me going I don't think you need to do a lot more research, but that, in itself, can be lots of fun.
Keep up the good work....I'll be watching this thread for more..........oh yes, I'll be watching very closely.



Hi SugarSprinkles,
You're so right about the research..Maybe I should have said On The Job Training,lol..Maybe for the next one,we should get requests?..
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