
05-05-2005, 11:32 PM
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Hey White Boy, by Dubblz
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Dear Lord, I pray for wisdom to understand my man, love to forgive him, and patience for his moods. Because Lord, if I pray for strength, I'll beat him to death. AMEN
It's no trick loving somebody at their best. Love is loving them at their worst.
~Tom Stoppard~
It isn't premarital sex if you have no intention of getting married.
~George Burns~
As bad as I am, I'm proud of the fact that I'm worse than I seem.
~A. DiFranco~
Last edited by fzzy : 09-08-2005 at 01:48 AM.
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05-08-2005, 03:06 PM
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Hey White Boy
Thanks for the positive reply..Part 2 posted..Think I'm going to further refine the style and try a novel next time..Thz Again
Dubblz
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05-08-2005, 03:06 PM
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Hey White Boy
Thanks for the positive reply..Part 2 posted..Think I'm going to further refine the style and try a novel next time..Thx Again
Dubblz
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05-09-2005, 09:48 AM
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Part 2 was very good also, I enjoyed it alot! Hot couple, those two, lol 
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Dear Lord, I pray for wisdom to understand my man, love to forgive him, and patience for his moods. Because Lord, if I pray for strength, I'll beat him to death. AMEN
It's no trick loving somebody at their best. Love is loving them at their worst.
~Tom Stoppard~
It isn't premarital sex if you have no intention of getting married.
~George Burns~
As bad as I am, I'm proud of the fact that I'm worse than I seem.
~A. DiFranco~
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05-09-2005, 02:57 PM
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Thx flutelady,really appreciate the feedback..First novel will be done in true story fashion tho..
Have a Great Day!!
Dubblz
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