A great story. I really like the creative and comparably believable buildup and the sweet mass of visuals that came with that and the main part. I also like the end - It was rather creative, as well.

Oh, and did I mention that the story made me pretty damn hard & horny ?
Shouldn't forget about that. :halo:


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... consistently writes a good read.

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Thank you so much, both of you! Lilith, I've read ALOT of your posts on this site, and getting ANY kind of compliment from you is VERY cool.

Love,
Cindy

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Thank you, sir, may I have another?

Cindy consistently writes wonderful stories. Her female characters are well-drawn and assertive, there's always an undercurrent of humor, the buildup and detail are vivid, and the sex is always blisteringly hot. Horny and intelligent, just what pixies love to read. Another wonderful piece, Cindy. Thanks again!

very sexy story !!!!!!!!!!!!! all of your stories are amazing

Please keep up the good work..............I would love to be in one of your stories....

LOL I'm in all of your stories..............you just don't know it