I think its cool, the teacher fucks the student and this is a punishment great stuff, and the bit at the end with laura excellent

this was a story told with passion... it seemed a little unedited which to me lent it some raw appeal

week

it was ok, all a bit rushed though, as if he/she had written it in 10 minutes on the bus or something. fucking cool idea though!

Premise of story is weak and unlikely-punishment is incredible.
Spelling and grammar very poor - it detracts from the erotic descriptions.
Badly needs re-write.

I thought it was rather short and a little disjointed. I enjoy stories but probably could not create an original story. thanks for the story

really a badly written piece of crap.

Hmmmm... how old is the person who wrote this story? Seems a bit immature to me. Do we know whether under-age people use this site, and do the moderators do anything about it?

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Erotically yours... Gus