Well after I got done licking my fingers and moving around the buldge I now have in pants I can tell ya what I thought. This is a very good descriptive story. I find sometimes writers are not good at telling a story in the first person. You on the other hand tackled this job with utter perfection. I felt like the person telling the story and that is the way it should be. Keep it up. As good as this was it should not be a one time effort.

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