03-10-2005, 11:57 AM
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pixie of the wood
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Join Date: Apr 2004
Posts: 10,575
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thought i might add the why-fors
it's somewhat dark--like sex and love can be--i loved that about it, and very expressive. it's metre mirrors this as well; reading a few words or sentences of what seems to be basic prose and then getting hit with several harsh cadences, one after the other, punctuated the feel of the poem.
nice bit of writing there, anxioushussy.
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