just give it some time, scribe. you're a writer, you know that not everything you wite is going to be the most fantastic read ever. i hope your not going to give up posting your stories here; i know you want to publish more erotica so use pixies as your test group kinda.

besides, it think it looks like your stories are doin just fine. chin up! doen't feel discouraged.

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Trees give peace to the souls of men * Nora Waln

The forest would be very quiet if no other birds sang than those who sing the best * Henry van Dyke

some fairly sordid tales, rambles, and anecdotes
Hypothetically Speaking * Something More * Cammy Interrupted * An Experimental Vacation * Masked * so..damn..hot * Thank You * My toy, his idea * no.19 Maple Lane * I Have A Surprise For You * Yesterday * In a Quiet Kitchen * help me decide * untitled prose * more untitled prose