02-05-2005, 06:38 AM
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Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 482
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Feedback on my second story Instructor and the Student
Hey everyone. I just wanted some feedback on the second story of mine. It's under the boy/girl category. It's called "the instructor and student." Anyway let me know what you all think of it so far
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