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Old 05-28-2002, 06:17 PM
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Its late and this isnt my best, but I felt the need to write and thought I'd share. Have you ever felt so lost, unhappy where you are, and would rather be somewhere other than here, just anywhere?

Thats how I find myself feeling lately, so I put myself where I want to be. If you havent picked up from my other posts, I have a fascination with eyes. This was written while picturing someones eyes..someone I consider a friend.

Theres a special way that I read this to myself..i think it makes it better. Read the 1st line with a slightly higher pitch than the second, and alternate back and forth. It gives a feeling of being on the ocean..to me.

Power in the Eyes
I look into your eyes,
and see the ocean so blue,
Together on a boat
in waves so few.

The gentle winds
blowing through your hair,
The sun shining down
on our skin so bare.

The aroma of your body
the sweetness of your smile,
your beautiful lips
takes me away for awhile.

I caress your face
so tender with care,
as our eyes lock
a long awaited stare.

My breath cuts short,
my heart...skips a beat,
with you at my side
I am finally complete.

I feel so peaceful
lost in your mind,
I dream of the day
of a love so fine.
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