Jessie, having just read your story I think that (so far) it's really great! You're right, it takes a while to become 'sexy' but I think that's arguably it's best feature - the seduction, the romance etc is very well writtten and becomes as engrossing as the sex scenes!

Well done so far! Great story!
CasperTG

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You know, Blackadder, for me socks are like sex. Tons of it about and I never seem to get any.

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