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I posted this in General sex talk, cuz I didn't realize there was one for erotic poetry...thanks to Lilith ( I BELIEVE, I'm knew here, so don't kill me if I got your name wrong..LOL ) she told me to post my poem here....this is my first attempt at an erotic poem..they're usually mushy...LOL..let me know what you think

what I like about sex

if you ask me, I must confess, there's so many things I like about sex.
the one man I'll let have his way, must be really good at foreplay
I love the feel of skin on skin, the anticipation of it sliding in
the gentle kiss, tender caress, the feeling of his warm soft breath
the crumpled sheets, our bodies entwined, the weight of your body laying on mine
after we do that for awhile, you flip me over and go doggy style
you lean over so I can hear, your grunts and soft moans caressing my ear
just when I think I can't take anymore, you turn me on my side and off of all fours
our sweat mingling, bodies getting weak and then we fall into a heap
lying there basking in the afterglow, we don't say a word, but we both know
we may be tired and physically spent, but given the chance, we'd do it all over again