Wow, a sudden outburst of poetry. Love this guys.

Miltone- Excellent poems my friend. Loved them. But, while I would use these to charm the panties off of a woman, I don't think that the sexual content is what I'm looking for on my site. I'm considering making another page just for poems of this sort. I'll let you know as soon as I can get the time to do it, and your poems will definately be there.

Maid- While totally confusing at first glance, that is deep. I read it again to get the context of everything. Very good. I will post this one as soon as I get a chance.

Wisper- I know that poems aren't always supposed to rhyme, but my interpretation of the poem for your friends is that it is more like an appreciation speech. We all have different styles, if this is yours, it's cool by me. The untitled poem seemed kind of non-poetic also. It seemed more like an encouragement speech for someone who just broke up with a signifigant other. It started excellently, then kinda fades at the end into more of a rant than a poem. Hope that's not offending, just a difference in taste.