I love being able to read your thought bubbles, and how you so concisely break down the evaluation process we subconciously engage in when we meet someone.

Great story so far, and the writing style drew me in and kept me there. Thank you.

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Though I am different from you,
We were born involved in one another.

For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul.

Complete surrender should not just come at moments in which one faces overwhelming odds, but in the calm when it seems one is personally in complete control of one's life.