First off, let me apologize. I had meant to start a feedback thread for your story which, for anyone that has yet to read it, can be found right here. I get sidetracked easily, truth be told, and there's just too much going on during the day. (There's a lot of porn on this here web, is what I mean to say. )

So let's get to it.

Wanda, you are a freaky little bitch. And I love it.

I am by no means an expert in writing and composition. (Of course, for all I know a so-called expert might not appreciate the style of your story, but that is not what's open for discussion.) I can say, however, that I really enjoyed reading about your night on the town, as well as your previous writings concerning your sexy encounters, and look forward to reading more. You fill in enough detail to set the scene without overdoing the descriptions. As the story progresses I find myself anticipating what is to come. For instance, I loved the way you described dancing and being brought to orgasm on the dance floor. Fucking hot! But you didn't just get right to it, you built up to it. Along with that you didn't take too long to get there. I really find it sexy and well written.

The long and short of it is, if you write it, I read it. Not only that, but I enjoy it as well.

Now, please tell me more of this ass you claim is not lacking in size...

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