08-02-2007, 06:59 PM
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Leo was right
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Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Eastern Iowa
Posts: 17,778
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Well, gotta say that I loved the story dear. Very nicely descriptive and well, flat out hot. Please, please, please post the next two parts. 
Oh and if you'd like a "Siskel and Ebbert" kind of review I suppose I can post a pic to give you my thoughts on your writing. 
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