Hey possom20. I've only written 2 things, both for the woman of my dreams I don't know much about poetry...tempo, rhythm, rhyming...so I don't know if this falls squarely into the realm of poetic writing, but I thought I'd throw it out there and see if it's at all interesting to anyone....

You are the coming evenings first star,
The celestial body on which I wish my
Universe of desires,
A new light born from darkness,
A pinpoint of heavenly fire that
Warms my heart and brightens my soul.

and the other...

I was walking last night, just as the sun was setting, turning the horizon a
mellon hue...as I approaching a small field on the side of the road a
fog began to rise. At first it seemed to be reaching out with tendrils like
silk blowing in the wind, but as it grew it began to surround me, capturing me
in its invisible grasp. As I stood there in its misty cage, it began to rise and
fall like a blanketed lover breathing under vague moonlight.
Moving. Silent. Unaware of my watching...
It made me think of you....