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Old 03-12-2007, 04:10 PM
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Glad you enjoyed! I didn't expect everyone to really dig the whole 'map' thing, but I have gotten a lot of email requesting such a scene so they can get more familiar and oriented toward the world. So I figured that would help.

I actually thought the sex-scene was somewhat roughly transitioned into to be honest...we have them kissing, getting emotional, then talking and calming down, then getting physical again, and then BAM, sex. That's how it felt to me at least, and I almost was going to do a re-write and try to make it smoother, but my fiance said it was good as is.

But hey, if my readers say it was good, then it's good!

Another chapter is in the works...this one may be a few weeks, not sure. Some of it's pre-written already, and some of it is going to have to be completely worked up from scratch. We'll see how it pans out
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